I notice you have been very busy finding a lot of information for your speech on dinosaurs Gevan. It looks like you may be missing a few words at the beginning of paragraph 4. I wonder if you could use another word instead of using "And" at the start of your sentences. By putting a space after using a full stop will make your speech easier to read. I wonder if you come up with an attention grabber for your audience at the start of your speech.
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Gevan
I notice you have been very busy finding a lot of information for your speech on dinosaurs Gevan. It looks like you may be missing a few words at the beginning of paragraph 4. I wonder if you could use another word instead of using "And" at the start of your sentences. By putting a space after using a full stop will make your speech easier to read. I wonder if you come up with an attention grabber for your audience at the start of your speech.
I look forward to reading more of your blogs.
From Mrs A